hypnotized by fireflies (righteousdame) wrote in thequestionclub,
hypnotized by fireflies

Anyone who enjoys poetry, or is just really bored: Any and all feedback, please. Feel free to be a jerk but I can't promise to care.

And with that, she was asleep
Stilled by his silence and his sound
So for a moment she found peace
Between a dream and solid ground

But nothing is static, to spite each endeavor
Everyone must come crashing down
Hopeless grasps won't feed her forever
Therein lies the solace she hasn't quite found

Her smile's unbroken, the words still bear rhyme
Her past is uncertain, her future seems bound
She is frozen in space and suspended in time
She may sink, she may fly, but she's going to drown

Thanks in advance.

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