I'm writing a short story. so fair it's a collection of snippets in no particular order so it doesn't make much sense. Anyway, is there anyone out there who would be willing to read what I've got so far and make comments? Particularly on the writing style, whether or not it flows. It's not very polished, just mostly stream of conciousness, but I'd appreciate feedback.
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