Nicole (ex_whatsthe) wrote in thequestionclub,
Nicole
ex_whatsthe
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My English class is currently doing peer reviews. But the essay I was given to read over is just... horrible. It's so filled with run-on sentences that I can hardly understand what they're trying to say. I had to read the entire essay to figure out the main idea, as it completely lacked a thesis. I'm in one of the highest English classes my college offers. I can't believe this writing.

If I were to actually say what I wanted, the entire essay would be covered in marks and corrections. I feel that's a bit mean, though... the teacher has another copy, and I'm sure he'll be correcting everything.

Should I sugarcoat my review, or actually say everything I feel?
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