||[Apr. 26th, 2012|12:15 pm]
The Question Club
May you please read over this letter to my roommates and tell me if it sounds passive-aggressive, aggressive, offensive, rude, etc? Should I reword it and if so, how?|
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I've had issues with my roommates in the past, especially when it comes to them cleaning up after themselves. Now, for the most part, none of the mess in the common area is mine, and while I want this message to make them realize they have to clean up their shit, I don't want to seem controlling. I am going to help clean up the common areas, but just do basic things like vacuuming, cleaning the floors, etc. If there are any messes that I know are just one person's, I'll leave it for them.
Any help or suggestions are welcomed.
EDIT: Second draft of the letter, having taken some of the advice offered.
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