Kelsi. (toseethesights) wrote in thequestionclub,
Kelsi.
toseethesights
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would anyone want to proofread my poem?

we have to punctuate as if we were writing in complete sentences, and that confuses me. (grammar is not my strong suit.)

i apologize for my nerdiness and overwhelming love for Han Solo.



I’ve only loved one man in my life,
You may find me somewhat strange.
I love someone who doesn’t exist;
Han Solo is his name.

He flies the Millenium Falcon,
His blaster in his hand.
He does whatever he chooses to do;
No action of his is planned.

Always in the nick of time,
Always starting trouble,
He doesn’t wait around for danger;
He finds it on the double.

With a smile as big as Texas,
Eyes as dark as night,
If I called him dreamy
I think that I’d be right!

So if you’re watching Star Wars
and your heart begins to burst,
just remember something:
Han shot my heart first.
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