Cantras (starlitsiren) wrote in thequestionclub,
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Okay, I work at a newspaper. I proofread stuff, but I dont' have say on what goes where or what doesn't go anywhere or anything like that.
I was proofing this article, and something just seems very, very wrong here. Like, whatever, his politics, I can stand that. I mean more wrong like something GLARINGLY OBVIOUS that he neglected to mention, or would stomp all over his argument and thus wasn't mentioned, or something like that.

http://www.iowastatedaily.com/media/storage/paper818/news/2006/06/13/Opinion/Hasenmiller.The.Slow.Death.Of.Freedom-2043792.shtml?norewrite200606140116&sourcedomain=www.iowastatedaily.com

What's the wrong thing?
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