grrlplea (grrlplea) wrote in thequestionclub,
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Can you give me some feedback?

So, I wrote my first song. My first song ever. And I would like some feedback!!


This is TQC, so telling you to be brutally honest is really unnecessary. But if possible, I would like some CONSTRUCTIVE feedback. I have ZERO knowledge of songwriting or singing and did this as an experiment. I'm not saying that to garner sympathy--it's the unfortunate truth. But for that reason, I would appreciate comments beyond "u fucking suck, bitch!"

Thoughts?

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